The written portion is broken up into two separate essays. The first is an "Issue" task where the test taker is given two general statements and tasked with choosing one and being either for or against it with a rainbow of possibilities in the middle. You can take it at almost any angle as long as the logic flows smoothly and there is sufficient evidence to back it up. The "Issue" task comes with a 45 minute time allotment. The second essay is an "Argument" task where we are given a prompt and must critique it's soundness of logic, use of evidence and general efficiency.
Today I spent my time on the latter half and because I (a) have no classes today, (b) feel deep shame over a lack of steady posts and (c) figured "why not?", I will upload a practice prompt and my general outline in regards to the "Argument" task. I wrote an outline rather than an actual paper since none of my readers are GRE graders and I am not really focusing on polishing my writing at this point - that's what the blog is for!
::::PROMPT::::
Six months ago the region of Forestville increased the speed limit for vehicles traveling
on the region’s highways by ten miles per hour. Since that change took effect, the number
of automobile accidents in that region has increased by 15 percent. But the speed limit in
Elmsford, a region neighboring Forestville, remained unchanged, and automobile
accidents declined slightly during the same six-month period. Therefore, if the citizens of
Forestville want to reduce the number of automobile accidents on the region’s highways,
they should campaign to reduce Forestville’s speed limit to what it was before the increase.
::::MY OUTLINE::::
- Short timeline, 6 months, makes it difficult to gauge the true impact.
- +15% accident rate seems like a convincing statistic but doesn't shed much light. Huge difference between +15% if we are talking about a yearly accident rate in the 300's and one in the 3000's.
- Most importantly, (the bread and butter), speed limit goes up on highway, spike in accidents don't indicate where the accidents take place or the type of accidents that occur (things other than speed related?).
- Using Elmsford, a neigbhoring "region", helps to negate general seasonal changes as a result of this spike and serves as an efficient example in this regard. One must exercise caution, however, when using a completely different region as the control for a study. There is no indication of either region's greater historical trends in regards to motor accident history so it might be unwise to base a decision on Elmsford.
- Finally, switching back may intro more damage with two willy-nilly shifts in such a close timeline. Drivers who might be adjusting to this new change must now readjust and this could cause accident percentages to further increase. Also, there would be a reintroduction of whatever problems initially motivated the speed limit to go up 10 MPH in the first place (traffic??).
So, hopefully I do well so I can go on to study that major in that place to get that job. I'll replace the "that's" when I come up with a better answer.
no mention of your friend who helped you out with a study website and book? I want my stuff back
ReplyDeleteI'll trade you for 6 1/2 Chicken Strips
ReplyDeleteRegardless of the prompt, your last sentence should be the following:
ReplyDeleteAmong all the essays I have written or will someday write, this will not be remembered as my greatest creation; that honor, my son, still goes to you.
(sound of moviegoers vomiting in their popcorn buckets)
Signed,
Iron Man 2's dad